Friday, July 25, 2014

CD : HS 15

CD /haiku-shuukan-15

young girl and her friends
fell deeply asleep, what dreams
slowed their way to Oz
*
Alice ate and drank in
followed a rabbit throughout
her own Wonderland
*
This is what happens when I am half asleep myself
and mix up two of my favorite stories...:
Alice and her friends
fell deeply asleep, what dreams
slowed their way to OZ

©JP/davh

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6 comments:

  1. Reading PleasureJuly 25, 2014 at 12:15 PM

    Is it Alice in Wonderland or the Wizard of Oz. Have read neither, though they remain all time popular.

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    1. JulesJuly 25, 2014 at 12:41 PM

      Dorothy for OZ - I am half asleep in the morning -good catch.
      But at least with Alice in the mix folks will think that perhaps I am also sleeping :)

      I'll fix it... but leave the boo-boo.

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  2. Reading PleasureJuly 25, 2014 at 12:53 PM

    Laughing so hard here, Jules. But you know, mixing up the two stories makes up great creativity. It had me guessing and that is a good thing!!

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    1. JulesJuly 25, 2014 at 1:06 PM

      So glad you laughed. I'm laughing with you!

      Making folks take a second look - could be a good thing ;)

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  3. ChèvrefeuilleJuly 26, 2014 at 2:18 PM

    Beautiful response on Opium Jules ... in both stories there was a kind of drug involved.

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  4. JulesJuly 26, 2014 at 2:29 PM

    Poppy Fields for Dorothy and mushrooms and vials of who knows what for Alice...

    For me, just the grogginess of dreams. :)

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