I
Thought your brittle austere tongue could save you?
You, haughtily drenched in the barnacles
Of your falsely burnished presumptions
You really think your words will last forever,
But they are really just rough chalk s cr awl s
To be made a b lu r as they are sc rape d away
With an eraser on the flinty old battered board
That exists in the front of your lifes’ classroom
I shall no longer be visiting your playground...
II
(..I..)
(Never)
(having to)
(have to deal)
(with you again)
(will remain)
(safe within)
(a loving)
(cocoon)
III
While we scrape by in these rough times
We will stick to each other like cemented barnacles
Our austerity comes from and rests easy in our hearts
Drenched in our devotion our tongues will wag with joy
The summer sun may burnish our skins
Smiling, we’ll chalk that up to another memory,
For the day when our brittle bones will set beside each other
Uncomfortable moments will become b lu rs in our vision
Our life was and never will be like cold stone flint
JP/davh © May 26, 2012
Process notes: The first stanza fell into place quite quickly, the rest with minor tweaking followed. I had to deal with an adult bully. But I shall hopefully never have to deal with that person again. I used the same Wordles in stanzas I and III and only used cocoon once.
The Sunday Whirl #58 http://sundaywhirl.wordpress.com/2012/05/27/wordle-58/
*scrape, *tongue, *brittle, *austere, *barnacles, *drenched,*chalk, *flinty, *blur, *burnished, cocoon, *rough
The companion piece or back-story of/for this poem can be found here:
http://julesgemsandstuff.blogspot.com/2012/05/sometimes-reality-shucks-monday-melting.html
