Monday, July 7, 2014

CD : 509 Chiyo-Ni 2



meigetsu ya ittemo ittemo yoso no sora
autumn's bright moon,
however far I walked, still afar off
in an unknown sky
© Chiyo-Ni
down from the mountain,
the moon
accompanied me,
and when I opened the gate,
the moon to entered
© Kotomichi
at the mountain top
it looks like I am bigger than the moon
in her first quarter

© Chèvrefeuille


~~~~~~~~~~
falling towards autumn
five days from full
only a partial silver smile
in the June afternoon
setting earlier each night
as thoughts wax into dreams
in the June afternoon
looking to nap in the shade -
day full of humidity

©JP/davh
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8 comments:

  1. UnknownJuly 7, 2014 at 2:42 PM

    your haiku is so beautiful... just befitting the prompt!!

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  2. UnknownJuly 7, 2014 at 2:45 PM

    Wonderfully written. Love words and form.

    Melanie
    bd

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  3. UnknownJuly 7, 2014 at 3:49 PM

    those days and evenings do have a dreamy element to them as the moon smiles out of reach.
    Happy summer Jules

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  4. AnonymousJuly 7, 2014 at 7:39 PM

    loving the thoughts waxing into dreams ....!
    Gorgeous.

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  5. carol l mckJuly 7, 2014 at 8:28 PM

    wonderful haiku and gets me thinking ~ life always intriquing ~ thanks, ^_^

    artmusedog and carol (A Creative Harbor)

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  6. AnonymousJuly 7, 2014 at 8:29 PM

    This so beautiful ...as thoughts wax into dreams...just breathtaking.

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  7. MarkJuly 8, 2014 at 6:14 PM

    "thoughts wax into dreams"

    A powerful image!

    Moon in My Wineglass

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  8. Bastet's Waka LibraryJuly 9, 2014 at 4:40 AM

    Lovely series and beautiful story a sort of auto-renga, brava!http://bastetswakalibrary.blogspot.it/2014/07/chiyo-ni-in-unknown-sky-july-8-2014.html

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