Sunday, July 13, 2014

CD : 514 Chiyo-Ni 3


asano eikou yoku baketto entanguru watashiha mizuwo motomeru
morning glory!
the well bucket-entangled,
I ask for water
morning glories --
awakened
in the middle of a dream
morning glory -
the truth is
the flower hates people
© Chiyo-Ni
Morning Glories
have overgrown the wooden fence
I take the back one
one single Morning Glory
along the path of the cloister
for just one day
in an eye blink
Morning Glory opens her flowers
just for one day
© Chèvrefeuille


blue roadside greetings
vines and tendrils wind around
wood electric poles
invasive weed, garden pest
I enjoy moonflowers best
white delicate kiss
in the cool of summer’s night
reflects silver glow

©JP/davh

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Morning_glory
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5 comments:

  1. ChèvrefeuilleJuly 13, 2014 at 11:14 PM

    What can I say Jules 'white delicate kiss / in the cool of summer's night / reflects sliver glow' is breathtaking ...

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  2. AnonymousJuly 14, 2014 at 12:24 AM

    Hello Jules -- the last stanza is really lovely -- I really liked how you changed the series' direction in the middle stanza. :)

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  3. Magical Mystical TeacherJuly 14, 2014 at 4:36 PM

    Ah, you are a lover of white morning glories!

    Morning Glory Pretender

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  4. Bastet's Waka LibraryJuly 16, 2014 at 4:10 AM

    lol ... loved your reply, it made me smile. A very fine write!

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