Tuesday, April 16, 2013

Linear: Miz Q #15





Linear

haiku
in dusks’ eye - a pink
rabbit runs to end of day
surrounded clouds

~~~~~

renga
in dusks’ eye - a pink
rabbit runs to end of day
surrounded by clouds

see left and right, blue sighs
thin painted ribbons flowing

surrounded by clouds
of the lengthening hours
a wink - in dusks’ sky

©JP/davh




Note: It's all about the line. I'm not one for reworking or editing, my own stuff, much less other folks pieces. 
Though it might be a nice thing to try one day. However, haiku is about the line. And last night I saw the pink rabbit run and I knew it was going to be immortalized today... 

PS While I can't promise I'll remember to do this every time, for those in WP - the bottom link (for ease of commenting) takes you to the same piece. 
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