Tuesday Tryouts: A Fresh Translation?
Fraicheur (haiga)......................... Freshness
Vent doux caressant.................... gentle breeze caresses
Vent doux caressant.................... gentle breeze caresses
corps brulant et bronzé................ burnt, tanned body
fraicheur délassée...................... relaxing in coolness
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Brunante paisible........................ peaceful dusk allows
brise venant de l’océan................ breezes from the ocean
somnifère d’été........................... gentle summer sleep
© Cheryl-Lynn 2014/069/11 cJP/davh
Please note:
I could not get WP to keep the format
so I posted 'here'.
Evidently 'B' wouldn't keep the format either so I had to add the '...' to separate the verses
Apologies to those who have WP
I may post over there too
Just my piece will follow Cheyrl-Lynn's
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