the way she looks, chills
taking what wasn’t hers...I
smile warmly, now
©JP/davh
note: coolness can also be
regarded as an emotion and
emotions are natural, yes?
(chills is apparently 2 syllables - 6,7,4 =17)
Wednesday, June 11, 2014
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Nice haiku Jules ... I like that other neaning of coolness in this one.
ReplyDeleteThis works quite well, Jules!
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