Sugar and Spice...
Ginger often got lost in the abstract views
on the other side of the bay window
in the library of the Victoria home
where she often spent the weekends with her Grandmother.
She would shimmy up onto the window seat
and fold herself like a thin decorated piece of origami paper
becoming an ethereal wisp of a girl -
like the fairy folk, princesses or other heroines
that were shelved in the closed books filling
the exquisitely carved dark cases that lined almost every wall.
This windswept wet spring afternoon was not ideal for seeking
the rainbows that could form from
the spangling crystals of the main chandler.
It was a fine one though for allowing daydreams to turn
the twirling maple seeds into a flock of petite dragons
whose sweet fermented breath could light birthday candles
on the cakes of lords and ladies dressed
in the fine pastels of birthing seasonal colors.
Her aches of missing home would vanish
with the cacophony of crashing thunder
which created a fitting coda to her time in this room
as she would jump with a start
and search through the maze of the house
to find comfort in the older woman’s waiting arms...
JP/davh (April 22, 2012)
http://sundaywhirl.wordpress.com/2012/04/22/anniversary-wordle/
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Process notes: The wind in my maples, just before the rain late yesterday afternoon, actually created the power to knock off groups of seeds at a lazy pace that looked more like little tan dragons flying than helicopters twirling and that was the inspiration for ‘Sugar and Spice...’.
Sunday, April 22, 2012
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This is really nice. I can so picture the girl. Lovely imagery!
ReplyDeleteNice one Jules.
ReplyDeleteJules, this was utterly charming. Best is your description of the girl as being made of origami paper, how she folds into the window seat... and when she runs to Grandma's arms. Loved it. Peace, Amy
ReplyDeletehttp://sharplittlepencil.com/2012/04/23/was-a-time-when/
I love this - can picture the maple "whirly-birds" looking more like dragons than 'copters ... a lovely narrative poem Jules, very nice
ReplyDeletemine's at THE WAY EYE SEE IT this week: http://aleapingelephant.blogspot.ca/2012/04/coda-of-crows-dragons-angels-and-swans.html
What an absolutely beautiful story, Jules. I love the ending.
ReplyDeletePamela
What a beautiful story imagined.
ReplyDeleteI like
allowing daydreams to turn
the twirling maple seeds into a flock of petite dragons
The use of origami was just lovely, as was the rest of this poem.
ReplyDeleteCommented, but then clicked, and not sure it went through...
ReplyDeleteI simply, absolutely adore this sentence:
"It was a fine one though for allowing daydreams to turn
the twirling maple seeds into a flock of petite dragons
whose sweet fermented breath could light birthday candles
on the cakes of lords and ladies dressed
in the fine pastels of birthing seasonal colors."
Just gorgeous!
Oh, I do love this so much, Jules... so imaginative and vivid. The girl sounds like a daydream I used to have as a child to escape like that.
ReplyDeleteLove the imagery in this. I was there with her.
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