Tuesday, August 26, 2014

Summer Quest 1:2

Summer Quest 1:2

next to my footprint
the empty shell of a hermit crab -
Ah! what a sadness
(c) Chèvrefeuille (2012)
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1.1
silent silver sets
velvet table cloth of night
tatted with bright stars
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1.2
constellations have
empty space; connect the dots
imagine the feast

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5 comments:

  1. ChèvrefeuilleAugust 26, 2014 at 5:32 PM

    Wonderfully written haiku Jules ... i like the scene you have distilled and inspired on my haiku.

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  2. Magical Mystical TeacherAugust 26, 2014 at 5:54 PM

    I've always had trouble connecting the dots on constellations; my mind doesn't seem to see what the ancients saw.

    Stray Shells

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  3. AnonymousAugust 26, 2014 at 8:09 PM

    Velvet table :-) wonderful

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  4. AnonymousAugust 27, 2014 at 11:12 AM

    I like "tatted with bright stars"!!!! :)

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  5. brudbergAugust 27, 2014 at 3:53 PM

    Oh.. love the series you are building..

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