Monday, May 5, 2014

CD Ghost 2 : Sky : speculation

a renga:
speculation

reflections, shadows?
parts of faces, yours and hers
majestic image?

hazel eyes seeking beyond
that imprint of you and she

apparently we
are more than just the sum of
our parts - or our words...

©JP/davh

6 comments:

  1. Wow I like this short story full of romance caught in a wonderful renga Jules ... strong feelings coming towards me ... awesome!

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    1. Thank you - the hazel eyes are mine, the him and her are/were my parents.

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  2. wao! it's a complete story... you tale it so well.

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  3. Yes, there is always more than meets the eye. Always.

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  4. What a beautiful renga.Full of lovely romance!

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  5. More than the sums... I like that :-)

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