Friday, May 16, 2014

CD : HS5 exile



haiku
to herself she keeps
the weather for company
still dreams of visits
renga
(because there is more to the story)
to herself she keeps
the weather for company
still dreams of visits
the choices she made, with him -
long gone - his ghost lingering
great-grandchildren ask -
of the picture you display;
tell us, who is she?

©JP/davh

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4 comments:

  1. Reading PleasureMay 16, 2014 at 9:58 AM

    A beautiful story in a nutshell.

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  2. PatriciaMay 16, 2014 at 1:13 PM

    Excellent ( I especially like the renga ! ) The elderly so often forgotten..
    Patricia - high five and raspberries -

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  3. AnonymousMay 16, 2014 at 2:27 PM

    I wouldn't know the definition of a renga if it bit me on the *beeeeep* (am on my way to look into that now), but I know when I like something I read, and this I really liked! Beautiful and very soulful!

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  4. AnonymousMay 17, 2014 at 12:26 AM

    titanic story? :)

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