a renga:
speculation
reflections, shadows?
parts of faces, yours and hers
majestic image?
hazel eyes seeking beyond
that imprint of you and she
apparently we
are more than just the sum of
our parts - or our words...
©JP/davh
Wow I like this short story full of romance caught in a wonderful renga Jules ... strong feelings coming towards me ... awesome!
ReplyDeleteThank you - the hazel eyes are mine, the him and her are/were my parents.
Deletewao! it's a complete story... you tale it so well.
ReplyDeleteYes, there is always more than meets the eye. Always.
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautiful renga.Full of lovely romance!
ReplyDeleteMore than the sums... I like that :-)
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