eye shadow, layered
fishnet stockings, stalking you
from under street lamps
dyed hair, cold souls - wondering
how to make payments to pimps
high stiletto heels
pierce the silence of the night
on the concrete walk
©JP/davh
Friday, May 9, 2014
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Really powerful and gritty - and true. Like these very much.
ReplyDeleteYou caught it, JP!
ReplyDeletewith this kind of 'prompt' keep the balance straight is really difficult, I think. Your one has the true, genuine picture.Love it!
ReplyDeleteI especially like that second stanza.. perfectly done...
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