Ryozenji haiku
a tadpole hidden
by koi pond shadows, takes breath
golden tail fins sway
golden tail fins sway
above white clouds dress blue sky
I adjust my hat
©JP/davh
Saturday, February 1, 2014
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Welcome at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai's Shikoku Pilgrimage JulesPaige and this haiku you share here is really awesome ... I like that twist in the last line of your second stanza. Hope to see you here again.
ReplyDeleteBy the way: I am your host at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai.
Thank you, Kristjann Panneman for the opportunity to attend and be attentive.
DeleteI love the hat adjusted... wonderful break there.
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