Thursday, February 13, 2014

CD 77 Santiago / St. James


kaeru grows wider, fat
dining on hand fed lotus
a pond offers relief

we are all children seeking
the rebirth of every day

a pond offers relief
and a place to lay her eggs
under calm clear sky

©JP/davh

Note:
kaeru = frog, return in Japanese
Also is a lucky symbol and related to travelers
kaeru is my companion guide on this journey

We are both ...female :)

4 comments:

  1. enjoyed the renku, have a nice Thursday

    much love...

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  2. Wow, I love the story you have written here.
    We are all lucky to find a place of relief.
    Be well

    http://johncommunicates.wordpress.com/

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  3. Wonderfully done Jules ... I am looking forward to the next adventures of Kaeru.

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  4. The egg-laying place is always a haven of safety and security.

    Whispered Prayers

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