kaeru has a tail
helps when swimming out of shell
- begin fluidly
some seeds are solid - need earth
sun, water, air, to breath; grow
- begin fluidly
kneeling, my eyes close - womb safe
once again I grow
©JP/davh
Friday, February 7, 2014
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immediate feeling of Emergence...intriguing post
ReplyDeleteI find this very intriguing... the beginning of life
ReplyDeleteThose last three lines are breathtaking.
ReplyDeleteExtraordinary set Jules ... full ôf new life.
ReplyDeleteThat is very tactile - the feeling intensified really imagining it.
ReplyDeleteWhile I did read your entry, there is no easy way to leave a comment.
DeleteAll seeds are little treasure chests.
All societies have faults...to judge many by one single action is unkind.
And yet it is kindness that heals.
I like how it all ends with "grow"--which is not an ending at all!
ReplyDeletePilgrims’ Shadowy Resting Place