An Elfje
change
silver coins
of dew frozen
garden bench sits idle
falling...
(c)JP/davh
WWP 127
http://wewritepoems.wordpress.com/2012/10/17/prompt-127
Wednesday, October 17, 2012
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A pretty poem containing much in a small package.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the feeling of change as fall progresses and loved the image of frozen coins.. unusual and I saw it so clearly!
ReplyDeleteYes condensed and pretty!
ReplyDeleteGreat form to express this...brevity becomes this topic! Nicely chosen. :)
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