Tuesday, October 30, 2012

Tuesday Tryouts: Photogenic?

Wordgathering Tuesday Tryouts Oct. 30, 2012
http://margoroby.wordpress.com/2012/10/30/ghosts-of-the-past-on-tuesday-tryouts/

Blended short forms, series of:
tau ku, pi ku, haiku, pi ku, tau ku

Photogenic?

apparitions begging
to be
whole, held remembered - are silent

overlay
they
now speak volumes

were there, our fathers,
uncles and brothers - they fought
still fight for freedom

overcast
they
return to us

apparitions hosting
their own
ghosts while internally at war


JP/davh
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5 comments:

  1. AnonymousOctober 30, 2012 at 12:11 PM

    Nice, Jules. So many concepts and ideas to like in this.

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  2. Sabio LantzOctober 30, 2012 at 5:08 PM

    could play with the forms -- And great message of overlays speaking volumes -- Margo's prompt was fun.

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  3. AnonymousOctober 30, 2012 at 6:39 PM

    The first stanza is wonderful, Jules.

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  4. JulesOctober 31, 2012 at 8:39 AM

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  5. Roslyn RossNovember 3, 2012 at 8:49 PM

    Great stuff Jules. I really feel you are moving into increasing levels of what we in Oz call 'guts.'

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