http://wewritepoems.wordpress.com/2013/01/30/prompt-140-its-post-your-poems-day/
The Eye of the Beholder
A Trio Elfje Wave between two Elfje;
A Different Elfje Quint:
Part and Parcel
There
is beauty
in natural silence
away from the maddening
crowd
~~~
Circus
showing at
Madison Square Garden
stuffed into nosebleed seats
ROAR!
Massive
crowds, sharing the same
air - unable to
see three
rings
Ants;
we all
marched together and
clapped when the acts
finished
~~~
Under
my willow
beside the creek
fresh air, insect buzz -
peace
(c) JP/davh
Wednesday, January 30, 2013
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"away from the maddening crowd" indeed,,,I enjoyed this very much,,,,
ReplyDeleteMy parents had season tickets for the Green Bay Packer games. I went to a few games when I was much younger, and was definitely pleased to be released from the stadium. Like you, I find peace and contentment in Nature. This works well, Jules,
ReplyDeleteElizabeth
http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/
PS - Those tickets are now passed around to our children and grandchildren, so the tradition continues.
I like this collection of cameos.
ReplyDeleteWonderful as always. I especially like the last one. (PS You're on the list now so I won't forget you again!)
ReplyDeleteloved the way you build up the feeling of being hemmed in / claustrophobia and then the relief of the peace of creek at the end!
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