Sunday, January 6, 2013

SW90 : Non-story-verse; a short piece

http://sundaywhirl.wordpress.com/2013/01/06/wordle-90/

listen, giddy, tumult, breath, ventures, bitter
step, practice, within, clarity, fire, awake


Within the clarity of fire awaken -
bitter breath leaves ventures tumult.
Step lightly with giddy curiosity
and with practice, listen...

(c) JP/davh
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14 comments:

  1. Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)January 6, 2013 at 7:38 AM

    Oh Jules - with such economy of words - such gentle wisdom... Lovely :)

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  2. Stan SkiJanuary 6, 2013 at 7:44 AM

    Great advice!

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  3. teriJanuary 6, 2013 at 10:17 AM

    Jules- The words found their place perfectly. We both found listening in our last bit. Great wordle

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  4. MargoJanuary 6, 2013 at 10:54 AM

    I still like it!

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  5. Marian VeverkaJanuary 6, 2013 at 12:57 PM

    Short, but with a message!

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  6. AnonymousJanuary 6, 2013 at 2:32 PM

    Very nice, and, yes, listen. We all could stand to do more of that.

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  7. brenda wJanuary 6, 2013 at 7:50 PM

    Nice! These words have been whirling through my mind for a couple of days, and you've given them beautiful expression. Brava!

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  8. ElizabethJanuary 6, 2013 at 8:19 PM

    I really like this Jules and how it describes an essential way to enter into life by savoring the awe of the child within you. Thanks for this one,

    Elizabeth
    http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2013/01/06/living-lesson/

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  9. NonnieJanuary 7, 2013 at 4:56 PM

    above all, listen!

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  10. Tumblewords:January 7, 2013 at 10:55 PM

    Very nice!!

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  11. Mama PajamaJanuary 7, 2013 at 11:04 PM

    yeesh...how'd you do that? can't believe you got all those words squished in there, but I loved the last line!

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  12. Roslyn RossJanuary 8, 2013 at 9:59 AM

    I like the way you worked with the words and let them hold their own.

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  13. Sabi SunshineJanuary 8, 2013 at 9:23 PM

    nice one :)

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  14. UnknownJanuary 9, 2013 at 8:13 AM

    I found this really mystical and imaginative - I've got story thoughts flocking through my mind now (not good, I'm at work not at home!!!) I love this inspiring piece

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