Prompted tan renga “a dream in a dream”
I
a dream in a dream
sand slipping through old fingers
autumn leaves turn red © Georgia
betrayed like Caesar, stabbed
broken hourglass; sand stops ©JP/dh
II
a dream in a dream
sand slipping through old fingers
autumn leaves turn red © Georgia
hanging, his red union suit
now slack; he basks in the sand ©JP/dh
III
a dream in a dream
sand slipping through old fingers
autumn leaves turn red © Georgia
trading bare silver maples
for palms a dream vacation ©JP/dh
Thanks Georgia :)
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