Monday, November 10, 2014

11.10 ...frosted... a haibun CD extreme 1

11.10 ...frosted...    a haibun
I walk to the end of the drive, inhaling cold air. No holes in my shoes, in a
warm coat this winter. Frosted by the daily news - I look for something good
to read with my breakfast. Thankful for the glass between myself and the
season.


frosted glass
visible breath expelled
I look for warmth
©JP/davh


Notes: The objective; Winter Feeling : haibun 55 words including haiku.
Two uses of the word ‘frost’:
frost(ed) verb: 13. to make angry
frost(ed) verb: 8. to cover with frost

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  1. Adas AlcoveNovember 10, 2014 at 12:04 PM

    This was such a lovely way to describe an ordinary moment.

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