Troiku is a haiku-form which Chèvrefeuille created several years
ago and it looks similar with the Russian Troika, a three horse sleigh.
The Sleigh is a haiku and with every line of that haiku, a new haiku
starts as being the three horses (lines) of the original haiku.
Troiku
the morning paper
the morning paper
in a plastic bag, lands on
the dawn of grasses
1
the morning paper
due to the news is often
left folded, unread
2
in a plastic bag
covered with September sighs
wrapped in sensation
3
the dawn of grasses
full of dew, the birds look for
refreshment and worms
©JP/davh
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