Sunday, September 28, 2014

9.27 Duel Prompts: ...notice leaves

9.27 Duel Prompts: ...notice leaves...
Acrostic / Shadorma is a Spanish 6-line poem of 3/5/3/3/7/5 syllable lines respectively.
Traditional haiku: 5/7/5 syllable lines; haibun: prose or other verse with haiku
Please see the shardorma prompt for the photo(s)
acrostic/shardorma/haibun:
...notice leaves...
feet scuffle
enter and egress
lilt, tap, dance
lope, trot, prance
entering autumn with grace
notice leaves; stop: see
*
apple red, orange
waves, yellow hues all -
east wind carries them
©JP/davh
Note: to me autumn colors are ‘fallen awe.’
Cemeteries hold our ‘fallen’ loved ones...
And there is always an ‘awe’ to see headstones,

especially very old historical ones.   

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  1. kaykualaSeptember 28, 2014 at 9:33 AM

    A fantastic offering here Jules. You managed to have the shadorma also within an acrostic poem together. I found it easier to separate them. You got an all-three-in-one.That is great!

    Hank

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