so many temples
all breaths become one
the steps flow (Cathy)
humble feet, one at a time
take each step, with my head bowed
stopping briefly; air
fills my lungs, my eyes blinking
so much beauty there
a caterpillar vision
unfolds ready to take flight (last three stanza) ©JP/davh
Fun! I like what you did with my haiku.
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ReplyDeleteIndeed the caterpillar vision... so apt
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