birds, earthworms and bugs
know to look for refreshment
here and there; always
in certain depressions large
or small where the rain collects
a sky reflection
looking up while looking down;
fluid dreams gather
©JP/davh
Monday, April 14, 2014
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This is lovely, Jules, and includes the whole world in the reflections - earthworms to blue sky. Love it. :)
ReplyDeleteI particularly like the last section, JP!
ReplyDeleteWe are having some much needed rain today! Ahhhhh!
The very last line---"fluid dreams gather"---is a gem.
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Great take Jules. I love your links; puddles as refreshment for the creatures and as a reflection. Beautiful!
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