twelfth month memories CD Special 123 12.21
The scarecrow's old hat
Was flung by the winter wind
Into a graveyard. © Richard Wright
landed on memories grave
the elder lost way too young
and the young not quite
able to breathe that first breath
so very still, cold
yet there the hat rested on
the flag of those who served true
father, brother, and
uncle, sister, mother, aunt -
grandparents who gave
along with the orphan and
the stranger - compassion's friend
tumbled yet again
over the flowers left there
weathered and brittle
the sun can only fade cloth
not the love kept in the heart
for on the mantle
candles are lit to honor
each and everyone
throughout the year, mind open
with the thoughts of how and why
those gone might enjoy
visions now that living eyes
treasure with delight
winter is but one season -
capping the end of the year © JP/dh
Note: While a cemetery is not my most favorite place. It is a challenge when days pass and we miss those we love. In this season last year we lost an elder. But when we gather to light candles and celebrate we always have a food item we know that would have brought joy to them. Without words it is like having them join us. Their presence honored. And too we remember all those, who that scarecrow's’ hat in the graveyard might have tumbled by...
So you have to start with this opening-verse or "hokku" and in your closing-verse or "ageku" there has to be a link or association back to this "hokku". Why? Well ... it's because of aesthetic reasons ... by linking or associating from the "ageku" to the "hokku" you make the "circle" complete.
"Soliloquy no Renga" in which I asked you to write a solo-renga with a maximum of 12 stanzas.
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