I wandered lonely as a cloud...
as if in the ether
ones and zeroes
lining, whirling, twirling, and making no sense
nonsense
until redirected into a spatial vortex
in an airless vaccum
like a breathless shadow
wanting, expecting, touch and voice
and yet there are nought of those things here
even in the bluest of skies
after a night of full rain
thunder and lightining
only those things with essence that understands such
phenomenon as rainbows - ever fleeting
like a breathless shadow
in an airless vaccum
until redirected into a spatial vortex
sense
lines, curved and straight - sentenced
zeroes and ones
the poet exists within a poem...
JulesPaige/davh (May 2, 2012)
Written for:
http://wewritepoems.wordpress.com/2012/05/02/prompt-104-its-post-your-poems-day/
Wednesday, May 2, 2012
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You've given me my first "damn-why-didn't-I-think-of-that?" since I don't know when. Now I'm going to have to start dropping appreciation notes into DropBox
ReplyDeleteThis is a gem! I like the symmetry of the first and third stanzas. This begs re-reading. Nicely written.
ReplyDelete"a breathless shadow in an airless vacuum"- This image struck me quite hard.
ReplyDeleteThis sent my mind spinning into your vortex - the binary math/science imagery is wonderful, adding to the lonely mystery of your poem.
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