Sunday, May 19, 2013

Sunday Whirl 109: Escaping the Void



Escaping the Void

blazing yet dark pulsating slab of nebulous
breath - your opaque and bleak touch,
wants to hover over...
(hover hover hover hover hover)
“me”
cut and crush my spirit -

I with my ex*ten*ded hand - the vision of
“STOP”
I produce a full force, a well lit

\   \     \   l   /     /   /
\   \     \   /     /   /
>bright white<
\ TORCH /
\of hope/
\   that   /
pushes
[ you ]
back

timing is everything,
I in triumphant stance
rise through the negative,
into positive space.

©JP/davh
 
nebulous, bleak, cut, vision, timing, touch, hover
crush, opaque, blazing, torch, slab, breath
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  1. UnknownMay 29, 2013 at 6:40 AM

    this is amazing - I love the words and the structure - very visual and impactful

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