Wednesday, November 21, 2012

WWP 132: The Perfect Opal...

WWP 132  three perfect sentences

http://wewritepoems.wordpress.com/2012/11/21/prompt-132-its-post-your-poems-day/


The Perfect Opal is Filled with Imperfections

Amid the fogged sea a ghost ship sallies forth,
that’s what muddled inbound thoughts be.

Yet in the middle of the hurricane the blind eye
sees everything, and ego nothing.

There isn’t even perfection in dreaming,
how can there be such in conscious streaming?

© JP/davh

1 comment:

  1. oh I know just what you mean about perfection and dreaming... absolutely love the last line!

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