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| ***** |
| “Limited” |
| ***** |
| The train runs... |
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| through thoughts |
| ...sometimes... |
D E / / R A I L / / E D
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| chewing....words |
$ Coherent ? Currency $
for WWP 115
12 word limit ...Tickets, Please
July 19, 2012
Process Notes: I probably spent more time on this than any long piece...but I had fun. And I've been waiting all week...But as I am on vacation I'm doing a fast post and will return later in the day to read.
Fun and interesting poem! I like what you did with the words, lines, and symbols. Nice.
ReplyDeleteLove it, Jules. I felt a very similar thing about this prompt. Just couldn't wait, lol. You nailed the poet, chewing words, yes.
ReplyDeleteElizabeth
Ah derailed thoughts. Good one. :)
ReplyDeleteHow cool!!! I like what you did here, Jules!!
ReplyDeleteIntriguing. You packed a lot into your 12 words
ReplyDeleteneil reid Says:
ReplyDeleteJuly 28, 2012 at 9:01 pm
I much appreciate your step outside the conventional with a poem that leaves me to wonder some (that’s virtue to me!) (perhaps I’m twisted some, but so be it then… )
I even like that you “made” a ticket. Haven’t seen that archaic style for many a year. But I like. All in all, thoughtful and playful both. I like.
Sorry but Blogger won’t let me ID, so can’t comment there. ~neil