Just Karma 218
(tau ku, pi ku pair)
sight; then sound
too good the mystery
to put
down; so up until after one
beeping voice
rings;
alarm echoes
©JP/dh
Smaller than haiku: line/syllable count
tau ku : 1/6, 2/2, 3/8
pi ku: 1/3, 2/1, 3/4
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