Just Karma 214
(tau ku, pi ku pair)
unnatural
unexpected; the bill
not of
the quacking kind, brought a cold chill
delivered
post
shivers the spine
©JP/dh
(Note: getting billed twice for the same
service may be the ‘root’ of the issue.
So now it is just a matter of sorting paperwork.
The initial shock of the amount due quickened
the heart, but froze the gaze, like a deer caught
in headlights . - Yes, I find inspiration for poetry
everywhere...)
Smaller than haiku: line/syllable count
tau ku : 1/6, 2/2, 3/8
pi ku: 1/3, 2/1, 3/4
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