Sunday, November 20, 2016

Just Karma 216 November 2016 b

Just Karma 216
(tau ku, pi ku pair)

more than a whisper

a taste of winter; rain
frozen
snow mix and gale force winds howling

barely a
leaf
left on a branch

©JP/dh

Smaller than haiku: line/syllable count
tau ku : 1/6, 2/2, 3/8
pi ku:    1/3, 2/1, 3/4


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