Just Karma 206
(tau ku, pi ku pair)
bone chilling
at five the sun is gone
the dusk
becomes shucked husk bearing no fruit
clouded sky
shows
no moon or stars
©JP/dh
Smaller than haiku: line/syllable count
tau ku : 1/6, 2/2, 3/8
pi ku: 1/3, 2/1, 3/4
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