Just Karma 179
surveillance
(a haibun)
amid the falling pre-autumn chestnut leaves swirling
in a forceful wind - perhaps the tail of distant gale
one brave yellow swallowtail unfurled, righted;
and bravely proceeded across the street
and out of sight and into a pale dawn sky
day stretches at a
constant tick or fluttering
of wings gaining way
©JP/dh
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