Thursday, October 2, 2014

10.2 CD 573 ...cookies...

10.2 ...cookies...


would have could have stood
if the waves were not so rough
tossed my cookies
©JP/davh
Note: Sometimes vacations are not full of the best weather.
Glass bottom boat tour guide said - If you are going to heave-ho
do so over the outside of the boat. I complied.

(Years ago...)

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2 comments:

  1. ChèvrefeuilleOctober 2, 2014 at 7:34 AM

    As I read this haiku Jules .... it brought a smile on my face. I don't know if that was meant to be, but in this haiku I like the humor.

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  2. Bastet's Waka LibraryOctober 5, 2014 at 2:54 AM

    Ouch ... sea-sickness in rough seas are not fun .. but your senryu was! ;-)

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