Thursday, October 1, 2015

ik 223 for October 2015 b

ik 223
dodoitsu/haibun
strategic move  

third party invitation -
uninvited guest enters;
there is a pink elephant
dancing in the room
*
lovely how you wish
upon that shooting star with
your eyes tightly closed

©JP/dh

Inspired by: Make plans you can look forward to.
From: Instant Karma by Barbara Ann Kipfer
8,879 ways to give yourself and others
good fortune right now.
*
Karma is cause and effect. Dharma means cosmic law.
Yoga is enlightenment through movement and Tao is the
practice of acting in harmony with the fundamental essence
of everything you encounter.

Note: My haiku (or other forms) are my interpretations
or of how I might put the inspirational sentence
into practice, for me.  Also, I am going in my own order.

“Dodoitsu is a form of Japanese poetry developed towards the end of the Edo Period.
Often concerning love or work, and usually comical,
Dodoitsu poems consist of four lines

with the syllabic structure 7-7-7-5 and no rhyme or metre.”

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