Just Karma 23
(Jorio/ Joria-haibun)
Hurry up and wait
As we travel again
Riding the rails back
Home to the familiar
one more yesterday
becomes a memory gift
for us to savor
©JP/dh
A Jorio is 4 lines, with each line 4 words.
Joria (plural of jorio) are moments in time, feeling, image.
More information can be found here:
haibun poetic verse including haiku
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