Saturday, June 30, 2012

RM MM 21 Elfje Trio: Melding

Elfje Trio: Melding
market
patchouli, sandalwood
sculpt natural serenity
opium from red poppies...
dye?

cafe
rose sundress
hippie sings karaoke
espresso acts like serum
drum?

yoga
to ease
the rapid heart
herbal raspberry rain -
live?

JP/davh
See more and learn about the Elfje form here:
http://simplyelfje.wordpress.com/

market, yoga, cafe, dye, serum, patchouli, sandalwood, raspberry, opium, herbal,
natural, espresso, sundress, serenity, rain, rose, sculpt, drum, karaoke, hippie
http://rosemarymint.wordpress.com/2012/06/25/monday-melting-week-21/


June 30, 2012
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5 comments:

  1. HannahJune 30, 2012 at 12:27 PM

    So many wonderful images and scents packed into this truly interesting form!! Well written Jules!!

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  2. UnknownJuly 2, 2012 at 5:32 AM

    Neat form. Really enjoyed how you incorporated the words from Monday Melting here. Really think the, for lack of better word, stop/start listing of images, and the connections the mind makes between each, is, and came off very, very neat. Really enjoyed. Thanks

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  3. AnonymousJuly 2, 2012 at 9:28 AM

    Always love your Elfjes, Jules. These are particularly fetching. :)

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  4. rosemary mintJuly 2, 2012 at 5:04 PM

    I love this poem, and I love this form! Thank you so much for sharing it. I'll have to try it. What a fantastic use of the words. I'm super excited over this. :)

    These are my favorites:

    "opium from red poppies"

    "rose sundress
    hippie sings karaoke
    espresso acts like serum"

    "herbal raspberry rain"

    ... so pretty much all of it. ;)

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  5. AnonymousJuly 10, 2012 at 10:36 AM

    Nice one as ever Jules and thanks for the continuing mention of Simply ELfje.

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