C3 Transformations
Johnny slowly took in each and every word that Mother and Father
tried to convey with the most upbeat of intentions, but the truth
was there; and it was with a small swelling of pride that he
was to be a part, perhaps a key to restoring natural balance.
Among the more wondrous things to happen during their secret talk of
revelations was that Mother’s Emerald that she always wore showed
Johnny that he was part of a larger family - he had so many siblings
but he unconsciously scrambled closer when Porter’s face came into view
He learned that his brother was not fond of the tumultuous depths
but endured the time in the galley with his friend Chan, a cook.
One day he hope that Porter would return to this shore, enable a fraternal
meeting - perhaps help fight the wrath that haunted the nights deepest dreams.
Johnny leaned in closer - unconsciously wanting to hug Porter for the
gift of his new life - he joined Father and Mother’s touching of the Charm -
and it seemed as if music played with the voices in the ships galley as
Porter and Chan shared laughter at the punchline of a finished joke.
Briefly Porter’s expression changed as he seemed to be staring straight
at Johnny - it was difficult to flee from this magical experience.
Johnny simply said; “Thank you,” as Mother and Father together withdrew
all of their connections to the stone. This was something new for them too.
http://sundaywhirl.wordpress.com/2012/11/04/wordle-81/
wrath, tumultuous, scrambled, flees, shore, key, swelling, upbeat, depths, enable, rotten, charm
30th piece in this series. Brenda continues to offer a list that fits :)
(c)JP/davh
Sunday, November 4, 2012
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It is exciting to take this journey with you, Jules, to watch you spread your wings and learn to ride the currents of the wordle words to a land of magic and mystery. That recognition between two brothers is a beautiful touch,
ReplyDeleteElizabeth
http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2012/11/04/what-would-the-neighbors-think/
I agree with Elizabeth and though I'm only catching in-between pieces of this series it is beautifully written. and I really like your clock story too. happy week to you Jules.
ReplyDeleteMagical! I love the story you've written from the wordle words.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your e-mail comment. The piece makes even more sense now that I've read the previous two pieces. I'm impressed that you're able to do such a long continuing story from the word lists :-)
ReplyDeleteHow incredible that you've been able to carry on this series for this long ... and it's an incredible series as well Jules, really quite something ... glad you stop by my blog so regularly and leave your link so I can keep up (thanks also for coming by to read and comment; it's much appreciated!)
ReplyDeleteAll the previous readers mentioned an ongoing list of pieces that you derived from the Wordles, but I don't know how to find it so that I can read them all from beginning to end. The poem is interesting, but I lack the continuity to truly appreciate it.
ReplyDeleteThis was such a gentle episode this week, one of pure love and its bonding. Yes, magical.
ReplyDeleteIt is always difficult to flee from a magical experience--at least in my experience! :)
ReplyDeleteSeven Haiku with Simon