Thursday, August 21, 2014

Little Creatures 2




cho kiete tamashii ware ni kaeri keri
the butterfly having disappeared,
my spirit
came back to me
© Wafu
wandering through the meadow
following the path of butterflies -
I find my spirit
© Chèvrefeuille
a renga 
(as I know it)
(5,7,5 line space 7,7  line space 5,7,5)

in the white flowers
the Monarch waited for her -
Little Miss with wide eyes
held safely in grama’s arms
her little finger pointed
would her dreams take flight
through pines, willow, maples and
the small white flowers
©JP/davh



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4 comments:

  1. SkyAugust 21, 2014 at 5:53 PM

    so gently ... so beautiful

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  2. UnknownAugust 21, 2014 at 7:53 PM

    This is so tender and loving! almost like a grandparent wrote this:)

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  3. JaniceAugust 21, 2014 at 8:41 PM

    Beautiful watching Little Miss through the eyes of the butterfly.

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  4. moondustwriterAugust 22, 2014 at 1:52 PM

    dreamy and sweet looking outward and inward.

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